Saiyuki Double Drabble
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kaoticwordsTitle: Losing
Fandom: Saiyuki
Characters: Gojyo and Hakkai.
Rating: PG 13 maybe?
Summary: Hakkai had won the fight. He was not so sure he had regained his "sanity".
A/N: Written for the challenge "What if..." of![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
100_roadtrips.
This is written from two points of view so actually they're two drabbles. Spoilers for vol. 7 of the manga (quotes included).
Disclaimer:These boys are property of Kazuya Minekura. We're all very happy they belong to her~
Please, be the one to stop me
“Hakkai! Shit, you can’t lose it, man! You listening?!”
Gojyo tried with all his force not to release Hakkai but it was resulting in quite a difficult task. Fuck, the guy had been able to stop Goku! He was tired and bordering on desperate and somewhere in between he had begun whispering instead of shouting.
“You can’t. Please...”
Gojyo rested his forehead against damp hair, not releasing the wrist he had pressed against the ground, and he must be losing it too because he didn’t realize when he had changed the hushing noises for kisses along Hakkai’s jaw.
I'm begging you...
All he saw was red. Red, just before he became blind and red now that he opened his eyes again. Crimson curtains hanging around his face.
“Gojyo...”
His voice was hoarse but he could have easily gotten free from the weight that pinned him down to the ground if not for the warmth that run up his neck and ear. He moaned and let his vines secure the body above him.
“Why are you making that face?”
When the last piece of metal closed around his ear, Hakkai knew he was losing it for he shouldn't still be hungry. He desperately was.
Fandom: Saiyuki
Characters: Gojyo and Hakkai.
Rating: PG 13 maybe?
Summary: Hakkai had won the fight. He was not so sure he had regained his "sanity".
A/N: Written for the challenge "What if..." of
100_roadtrips. This is written from two points of view so actually they're two drabbles. Spoilers for vol. 7 of the manga (quotes included).
Disclaimer:These boys are property of Kazuya Minekura. We're all very happy they belong to her~
Please, be the one to stop me
“Hakkai! Shit, you can’t lose it, man! You listening?!”
Gojyo tried with all his force not to release Hakkai but it was resulting in quite a difficult task. Fuck, the guy had been able to stop Goku! He was tired and bordering on desperate and somewhere in between he had begun whispering instead of shouting.
“You can’t. Please...”
Gojyo rested his forehead against damp hair, not releasing the wrist he had pressed against the ground, and he must be losing it too because he didn’t realize when he had changed the hushing noises for kisses along Hakkai’s jaw.
I'm begging you...
All he saw was red. Red, just before he became blind and red now that he opened his eyes again. Crimson curtains hanging around his face.
“Gojyo...”
His voice was hoarse but he could have easily gotten free from the weight that pinned him down to the ground if not for the warmth that run up his neck and ear. He moaned and let his vines secure the body above him.
“Why are you making that face?”
When the last piece of metal closed around his ear, Hakkai knew he was losing it for he shouldn't still be hungry. He desperately was.
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Date: 2008-12-03 05:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-03 11:18 pm (UTC)Me alegra que lo pienses! Quería algo contundente pero no te creas que estaba muy segura de dejarlo así.
Lo cierto es que estoy bastante oxidada a la hora de escribir... Todavía más en inglés! aunque me viene bien intentar desentumecerme un poquito de vez en cuando. Así que toda crítica constructiva es muy bien recibida!
Y si son positivas todavía más, jajaja:)no subject
Date: 2008-12-03 06:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-03 11:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-08 02:47 pm (UTC)Gojyo susurrando es impactante, para alguien que se pasa la vida pegando gritos por ahí. Y que Hakkai NO se piense algo dos veces...vaaaya o¬o
Algún día de estos me gustaría ponerme a escribir algún drabblecillo de Saiyuki, tengo mono y me das envidia xD
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Date: 2008-12-09 10:54 am (UTC)Me alegro mucho de que te haya gustado! Gracias! ♥
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Date: 2008-12-09 02:02 pm (UTC)Escribe escribe, me gusta *_*
♥
Date: 2008-12-09 11:36 pm (UTC)^_~